Losing my grip

Held your hands and I let it go

You promised the world and I didn’t know

Had your love and blew you away

You gave everything but still get treated this way
Never realized I’m making you cry

You made it work while I didn’t even try

I was careless and wreckless and I wasn’t sorry

Hurt your feelings daily and didn’t even worry
Now you’re gone and won’t be coming back

Now I beg and pray to get us back on track

You left and started anew

You’re now happy and I’m askew
Now I’m rhyming and I don’t know why

Finishing this piece by saying goodbye

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16 Comments

  1. ANG SAKEEEEETTTT!!!!! T.T KAKABREAK LANG NAMEN E! ANSAKET SAKET MYGAD! T.T

  2. grabe naman to.. Ramdam na ramdam ko ung emotion nito.. Nice poem and I love it

  3. Apigo, Maria Maise Ann / Mar142
    1. Implicit
    2. Knowledge because the author educate the readers about his/her past relationship.
    3. ” The Foolish Game”, because it shows here that other partner shows unwise actions wherein he/she didn’t really give and show his/her care, love, and sweetness when they are still together.

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