Losing my grip

Held your hands and I let it go

You promised the world and I didn’t know

Had your love and blew you away

You gave everything but still get treated this way
Never realized I’m making you cry

You made it work while I didn’t even try

I was careless and wreckless and I wasn’t sorry

Hurt your feelings daily and didn’t even worry
Now you’re gone and won’t be coming back

Now I beg and pray to get us back on track

You left and started anew

You’re now happy and I’m askew
Now I’m rhyming and I don’t know why

Finishing this piece by saying goodbye

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Rien Alexis P. Colaso

ANG SAKEEEEETTTT!!!!! T.T KAKABREAK LANG NAMEN E! ANSAKET SAKET MYGAD! T.T

Johnaaronbustonera

grabe naman to.. Ramdam na ramdam ko ung emotion nito.. Nice poem and I love it

Maria Maise Ann Apigo

Apigo, Maria Maise Ann / Mar142
1. Implicit
2. Knowledge because the author educate the readers about his/her past relationship.
3. ” The Foolish Game”, because it shows here that other partner shows unwise actions wherein he/she didn’t really give and show his/her care, love, and sweetness when they are still together.

Jiselle Capillo

JISELLE CAPILLO AND CHLAIRE BARENG #ARC132.

Vincent Raymond Fernandez

MOMENT
Vincent Raymond Fernandez
CIV162 Art Appreciation MQ2

Amador, Ma. Angelica D.

Amador, Ma. Angelica D
Mar141-HSOCCFM
T.O.T.G.A

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