Losing my grip

Held your hands and I let it go

You promised the world and I didn’t know

Had your love and blew you away

You gave everything but still get treated this way
Never realized I’m making you cry

You made it work while I didn’t even try

I was careless and wreckless and I wasn’t sorry

Hurt your feelings daily and didn’t even worry
Now you’re gone and won’t be coming back

Now I beg and pray to get us back on track

You left and started anew

You’re now happy and I’m askew
Now I’m rhyming and I don’t know why

Finishing this piece by saying goodbye

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16 Comments

  1. Rien Alexis P. Colaso
    Rien Alexis P. Colaso

    ANG SAKEEEEETTTT!!!!! T.T KAKABREAK LANG NAMEN E! ANSAKET SAKET MYGAD! T.T

  2. hahahaha ang kulit nun Lul. 😀

  3. ang saket sakeeeeet! ?

  4. Don’t take things for granted kasi

  5. Johnaaronbustonera
    Johnaaronbustonera

    grabe naman to.. Ramdam na ramdam ko ung emotion nito.. Nice poem and I love it

  6. Maria Maise Ann Apigo
    Maria Maise Ann Apigo

    Apigo, Maria Maise Ann / Mar142
    1. Implicit
    2. Knowledge because the author educate the readers about his/her past relationship.
    3. ” The Foolish Game”, because it shows here that other partner shows unwise actions wherein he/she didn’t really give and show his/her care, love, and sweetness when they are still together.

  7. JISELLE CAPILLO AND CHLAIRE BARENG #ARC132.

  8. Vincent Raymond Fernandez
    Vincent Raymond Fernandez

    MOMENT
    Vincent Raymond Fernandez
    CIV162 Art Appreciation MQ2

  9. Lim, Andrea Joyce P.
    MAR 141 – HSOCCFM

  10. Amador, Ma. Angelica D.
    Amador, Ma. Angelica D.

    Amador, Ma. Angelica D
    Mar141-HSOCCFM
    T.O.T.G.A

  11. Do what makes her happy while she was with you because you might regret if you lose her.

  12. Tamayo, Christian James
    Arc132
    Sociology and family planning

  13. Apigo, Maria Maise Ann D.
    mar142
    Sociology and Famplan

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