Held your hands and I let it go
You promised the world and I didn’t know
Had your love and blew you away
You gave everything but still get treated this way
Never realized I’m making you cry
You made it work while I didn’t even try
I was careless and wreckless and I wasn’t sorry
Hurt your feelings daily and didn’t even worry
Now you’re gone and won’t be coming back
Now I beg and pray to get us back on track
You left and started anew
You’re now happy and I’m askew
Now I’m rhyming and I don’t know why
Finishing this piece by saying goodbye
16 thoughts on “Losing my grip”
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ANG SAKEEEEETTTT!!!!! T.T KAKABREAK LANG NAMEN E! ANSAKET SAKET MYGAD! T.T
Lul
hahahaha ang kulit nun Lul. :D
ang saket sakeeeeet! ?
aw. nice
I learned my lesson ?
Don’t take things for granted kasi
grabe naman to.. Ramdam na ramdam ko ung emotion nito.. Nice poem and I love it
Apigo, Maria Maise Ann / Mar142
1. Implicit
2. Knowledge because the author educate the readers about his/her past relationship.
3. ” The Foolish Game”, because it shows here that other partner shows unwise actions wherein he/she didn’t really give and show his/her care, love, and sweetness when they are still together.
JISELLE CAPILLO AND CHLAIRE BARENG #ARC132.
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Vincent Raymond Fernandez
CIV162 Art Appreciation MQ2
Lim, Andrea Joyce P.
MAR 141 – HSOCCFM
Amador, Ma. Angelica D
Mar141-HSOCCFM
T.O.T.G.A
Do what makes her happy while she was with you because you might regret if you lose her.
Tamayo, Christian James
Arc132
Sociology and family planning
Apigo, Maria Maise Ann D.
mar142
Sociology and Famplan