Losing my grip

Held your hands and I let it go

You promised the world and I didn’t know

Had your love and blew you away

You gave everything but still get treated this way
Never realized I’m making you cry

You made it work while I didn’t even try

I was careless and wreckless and I wasn’t sorry

Hurt your feelings daily and didn’t even worry
Now you’re gone and won’t be coming back

Now I beg and pray to get us back on track

You left and started anew

You’re now happy and I’m askew
Now I’m rhyming and I don’t know why

Finishing this piece by saying goodbye

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ANG SAKEEEEETTTT!!!!! T.T KAKABREAK LANG NAMEN E! ANSAKET SAKET MYGAD! T.T

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hahahaha ang kulit nun Lul. 😀

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ang saket sakeeeeet! ?

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aw. nice

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Don’t take things for granted kasi

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grabe naman to.. Ramdam na ramdam ko ung emotion nito.. Nice poem and I love it

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