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We sometimes associate certain places with a specific event in our lives. Behold such great childhood memories that never fade.

We sometimes associate certain places with a specific event in our lives. Behold such great childhood memories that never fade.

There are places I’ll remember
All my life, though some have changed
Some forever, not for better
Some have gone, and some remain

– The Beatles




My childhood home was something to behold

Surrounded by nothing other than nature

Tall evergreens in every direction

They swayed and bowed in the cooling winds

Provided shade for us in the heat of the day

And shelter from a sudden downpour

Born and raised in Forest Lake

I was unaware that everyone didn’t have

The luxury of being surrounded by such beauty

Every day I woke to beautiful friends who

Happened to also be trees

I would bow or curtsy as I walked or rode by

And when the wind would howl

They would return the kind gesture

Bowing to me as if saying hello

I moved away to college where I was

Surrounded by rolling hills

Not as many trees to admire

But never-ending ground to explore

I then was married and had the unexpected

The pleasure of being surrounded by a lake

Not just any lake, the lake of all lakes

Lake Minnetonka glistened like diamonds

During the day and sparkled under the moon

Each night when I would return home and

Rest my weary head so I could enjoy it again

The next day would bring another adventure

When we moved to the country in Carver

I missed being surrounded by trees

I missed searching out every lake

Flat farmland filled with homes

Homes as far as the eye could see

Homes that housed my neighbors

Which created community

Community and fellowship and

Lifelong relationships with people

That I adore and love

So now even though I am not greeted

By trees or hills or lakes

I am greeted by smiles and kindness

With hugs and cups of coffee

With laughter and a promise

Joy and happiness will be found together

Minnesota will always be my home

A treasured friend

With whom I will never part

I am forever thankful for Minnesota.


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Kelli J Gavin
Kelli J Gavin lives in Carver, Minnesota with Josh, her husband of an obscene amount of years and they have two crazy kids. She is a Writer, Professional Organizer and owns Home & Life Organization and a small Jewelry Company. Look for Kelli’s first book of short stories and poems in 2019. You can find her work with The Ugly Writers, Sweatpants & Coffee, Writing In a Woman’s Voice, The Writers Newsletter, Writers Unite!, Academy of the Heart and Mind, The Rye Whiskey Review, Spillwords, Mercurial Stories, 121 Words, HerStry, Ariel Chart, The Basil O’Flaherty, PPP Ezine, Southwest Media, Otherwise Engaged, Pleat her Skin, Paper.Li, The New Ink Review, among others. Find Kelli on Facebook, Twitter and Instagram @KelliJGavin

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Jeter Santiago

we’ll feel love in our home, it brings back the memories that we’ve done before. ❤️

Janeth Mantos
Janeth Mantos

Cherish every memories 💕

Danilo Ramirez
Danilo Ramirez

Seize every moment. It is rightly said that it doesn’t matter where you go in life, but what matters the most is, whom you have beside you all the way. Behold!

John edward Fajarda

Theres no place like home❤️

Kean Nehemiah Pascua

It reminds me of how blessed I am to have something that I can call my home. A place where I can take reguge from the storm and feel peace.

Hannah Mishariah Baylon
Hannah Mishariah Baylon

Home is Love 💕

Mark Angelo Dela Cruz


Isabelle krizia Segundo
Isabelle krizia Segundo


Felix Jerome Mercado

Every seconds, minutes, hours, days, or even week and months are important. Cherish every moment

Jermaine Clarize Vargas
Jermaine Clarize Vargas

It is truly worth it to be at the place that you can call ‘home’.

Karrenmae Navarro
Karrenmae Navarro


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Isabelle Krizia Segundo

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