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Letting Go

I dreamt I saw you. Perhaps I did see you in the distance of my imagination. And I caught the moment stilled in shock and held on to it.

Letting Go

I dreamt I saw you.
Perhaps I did see you
in the distance of my
imagination.
And I caught the moment
stilled in shock
and
held on to it.
I held it
and
the past held
for another moment,
our past,
and then I freed it
let it go
to fly
away
like a bird,
as if you
were a bird.

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Lynn White
I live in north Wales. I have been writing at various points in my life since I was in my teens. My work is influenced by issues of social justice and events, places and people I has known or imagined. I am especially interested in exploring the boundaries of dream, fantasy and reality.

16 Comments

  1. Dhana Lhey Antonio
    Dhana Lhey Antonio

    Letting go of things means freeing ourselves from the hurt and the pain

  2. Angela Luz Calayo
    Angela Luz Calayo

    Letting things go is hard, but if letting you go will make you happy then i will let you go even of it hurts

  3. [Mark Matthew F. Hernandez], [CIV191], Moment, [MQ2], Distance

  4. Isabelle Krizia Segundo
    Isabelle Krizia Segundo

    Isabelle Krizia P. Segundo, CIV192, Art Appreciation, Colors, MX

  5. Joshua Bernardino
    Joshua Bernardino

    Joshua R. Bernardino, CIV192, Art Appreciation, Lights, MX

  6. Eugene Narvaza Nilo
    Eugene Narvaza Nilo

    Eugene N. Nilo, CIV192, Art Appreciation, Lights and MX, Rule of Thirds

  7. Roberto S. Jaime, CIV192, Art Appreciation, Lights, MX, Golden Hour

  8. [MENDOZA,EUREKA JANAH], [CIV192], [Art Appreciation] ,[Lights][Golden hour],[MX]

  9. Allison Danielle Smith
    Allison Danielle Smith

    Allison Danielle Smith, CIV191, Art Appreciation, Lights, MX

  10. [Marislea Paed, CIV192, Art Appreciation, Lights, MX, Golden Hour, Rule of Thirds]

  11. Aprille Gail Mari P. Domingo, CIV191, Art Appreciation, Lights, MX

  12. [Mark Matthew F. Hernandez], [CIV191], [Art Appreciation], [Lights], [MX], [Rule of Thirds]

  13. [Jerryvie D. Titong], [CIV191], [Art Appreciation], [Lights], [MX]

  14. Glarenceeee Cammayo
    Glarenceeee Cammayo

    Glarence G. Cammayo, CIV191, Art Appreciation, Lights, MX, Rule of thirds

  15. Junelin Lyzel Bayudan
    Junelin Lyzel Bayudan

    [Junelin Lyzel Bayudan], [ESE191], [Art Appreciation], [Lights], [MX]

  16. Rizza R. Mendones
    Act182
    Art Appreciation
    Lights
    MX

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