Two Valleys
Beneath the callow bed of vines
the hour falls:
we wasted many despotic dusks
the summer after The Fall
looking out upon a cloud-shattered hollow
where feline mountains rub their
mossy backs against the lone palms
of the sky
and we could say nothing, as though
the furtive snipes muted the world
as though our voices dissolved into
the air like valium hosts
I saw beneath the haze
with drooping neck and gaze;
Hold up my chin, I sleep
but I have not slept
in such a pixelated world
In my shuffling trance,
of fierce pernicious fugue-like
Freudian facades, I saw, O dream
spectral plane and rainy day:
The valley titan in the house of the gadfly
Gaea, in heat, at once the sloping
shape of her shins, and rounded crests
of her knees lay shuddering against
the river’s bend
Days later, when again we walked
along the ridge, like birds in play
you asked about the great folly
long before the damage—
At the time the mountains were born,
and fire sprayed and labor’s tears
like weakness fled in sating streams
before the hour of once unwitnessed
nativity, the mother carved its slaking
cradle from the clay
And you laughed at the very thought
of the atoms working such a miracle,
and that we were always of the absent
space between our thighs, knowing entirely
that we had no such taste
So as the night came kneeling
upon that bed there were only our thoughts
and distant unencumbered memories
of the Great Rift, where years ago
those old apes came down from the trees
and dipped their teeth in blood
for the first time
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Wow! Very interesting and creative. Your metaphors and images are unique! A great read! :D
very creative of your poem :D