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Lonely Claim

I am your time that is up Your story that’s come to an end Your regrets and words unsaid. Your what ifs and maybes. Your whys and cries. Your hows and tries. Your breaking point and last stand. Your surrender and longest slumber.

Everything I touch decays,
Everyone I visit cries
Everywhere you go I visit.
I am your haunting shadow.
I am your lonely darkness.
I know not reason or fairness.
I know not harshness or kindness.

Some I bring sorrow
Others’ I give relief
But all coin me with fears.
I am neither harsh nor fierce
I don’t see your tears
or feel your soul as it sears.
Decay, is my favorite pair of shears.

Your life is my game
Young or old I claim
Rich or poor I claim
Healthy or sick I claim
Believer or sinner I claim
Happy or sad I claim
Good or bad I claim
Strong or weak I claim
Your soul is mine to claim.
Hurt is my maim
and loss my frame.
Death is my name
and man I always tame.

I am your time that is up
Your story that’s come to an end
Your regrets and words unsaid.
Your what ifs and maybes.
Your whys and cries.
Your hows and tries.
Your breaking point and last stand.
Your surrender and longest slumber.

I am never early or late
You can’t argue with me or negotiate.
You can run but I don’t procrastinate.
I don’t care if you cry or hate.
You have no choice but to partake
in my claim without having a stake.

Those I take, into ashes I make
Those I spare, I bid a retake.
Those I touch I usually break.
Heed my visit and prepare to partake
in joy and goodness for your own sake.
But don’t expect me to give you a break.

I am the cycle of beauty and decay.
I am the parable of value and time.
I am why you treasure and whine.
I am your solace and oblivion.
I am the end of man’s dominion
I am man’s hope for reunion
with loved ones and communion.
I am death life’s interjection
and eternity’s introduction.



Author’s Notes:
P.s. please right click on the image to have it open in a new tab to see it in full size thank you. 
Inspired by a prior brevity by Pasithea Anima Libera on
My Name Is
My name is the destroyer of pleasures
the conqueror of kings and citadels
the soul bounty hunter- Azrael.

Death or the angel of death is known in the east in Arabic by the phrase ” hadimul lathat” which literally translates to destroyer of earthly pleasures. He permeates citadels like gusty winds and overthrows kings from thones like a turmoil taking over with famine and plague. That is death and Azrael is his personification.


Catch more of Pasithea Chan with her previous posts here. You can also find her brand of poetry on Facebook.

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It makes me realize that Death is not a scary thing.

Crizzalyn Cruz

Death is so scary to the point that if you die today, you’ll never know what will happen next; you’ll never know where we will go. But aside from the frighten we’re feeling from death, we tend to ask ourselves “will I be able to touch them? Will they feel that I still love them?”. It’s scary and sad to think that when you die, you can never be with your loved ones again..

Casey Alcober

Yup, this piece, made me really, realized, how deep “death” is. And death, i think, is not something you should be scared of. But honestly, I am scared. LOL. I cant afford to lose another loved one. and i think, i wouldnt be able to bring back my shits together if death knocks again.

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Carmella Jane O. Caligan

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Jesica Dagsaan

All of us will come to a certain end. Death is inevitable. We must accept that. We must be ready at all times. So we must live of life to the fullest. Death may bring loneliness to others but it may also bring joy to those who suffer and those who lived their life because they knew that even if they leave this place, there is one thing that marks them.

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Dana Aliganga

Basically you’re right! Death is not the ending, it’s the final awakening.

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An inevitable ending game for the human being. This is the most scariest game everyone was required to be on it, no escapes no shortcuts. Article made every reader realize what you’ll leave or what you’ll get when the time comes. “I am the cycle of beauty and decay” the significant line I read from the article, there’s too much emotions and impact on it.

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Everyone has their own other side. Sometimes you just have to be used to it.

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Death is something that you cannot control. If it is your time you cannot stop it. Death is a really scary thing but we should accept it because all of us will go through it.

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Everything will come to an end. If it’s our time, it will. We can’t force things,we can’t predict when it will happen. It is scary if you will think of it so you better cherish the moments while you are living.

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Everyone has their own schedule from being visited or to come with death. Death brings sorrow and grievance but everyone has their own time in this world, and no one knows how long one stays in the surface.

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Death is something that we will face someday. And we just need to be prepared, it is indeed “scary” but we must face it. It is not the end, it is just the beginning. As we are still living in this world, do the things that you want to do before you regret. Long live!

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I realized that death isn’t scary at all. Besides, there’s life after death.

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I realized that death does not choose who, where and when it will take. When its your time you cannot do anything about. We will just accept tha fact and go for it.

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Death is something we must not fear of especially when we are able to maximized our life when we are still alive.

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Death is the only thing that no one can escape. We will never know when and where it will come. And it is the hardest thing to accept.

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Luigi Cruz

Ever since, I am not afraid of death, and this poem teach me that I should not be scared of death.

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We must be ready everyday because we don’t know when we will die. Also everything will come to an end.

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Death is not scary at all if you know your purpose why you are living here in this world.

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Death is our final destination. This might bring sadness to our love ones but on the other side we must fearlessly face it. So, better live your life in the fullest and make everything worthwhile.

Andrea Fernandez

Death is a natural occurrence to one’s life. The concept of death gives worth and value to life. It is the end where there’s no pain, sadness, and illness but an eternal rest. But even how beautiful I or you describe it, it is not a thing that anyone would wish for.

Clarisse Salipot

death is the end of our life whether we like it or not. but we should not be afraid because there is another life after death.

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Cyce of in and out,
An awful game of life,
Commencement of journey,
Termination of Drive
You can run,
But you cant hide
Better to face with faith
Then live with no regret

Death is the name of the Game
where no one can ever prevail

Dana Caluza

I don’t fear death, but I’m afraid of dying without being able to do my purpose in this world.

April Moselina

A whole lot of us will come to an end. Death doesn’t chose whoever you are. Accept it and be ready for everything that might happen.

Jonathan Arcayna

Showing the natural order of everything. I think Death is somehow one of the best thing that can happen to us, Death gives value to almost everything. Not just the existence of something but knowing that everything will soon comes to an end.

Joyce Andres

In this poem I realized that even we are healthy death would come. Death don’t choose who will they get. Death is always near us waiting for the time they will get us. Like in the poem if your time comes there is no more chances so we better live to the fullest. I am afraid of death because of my family I am afraid that I would live them sad but reality is reality we live and died in this world accept it or not time will come for us.

Rhia Sapa

We should not be afraid of death, death is not an end but a new beginning where there’s an eternal peace.

Regienald Obiña

Death is a scary thing for sure. Because you will not know what will happen next as the times goes by. For me Its so very hard to lose your love one and I think that’s the most scariest part is that losing your love ones in unexpected way.

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Death is inevitable and whether we like it or not we are all going to die. It’s just that we have our own way on how are we going to live our life to the fullest.

Kiana Rara

It’s the scariest thing above others, because it is the time that second chances doesn’t exist anymore. We can’t be with the people we love, that’s why while we ate living make the most out of it. Don’t do things that you may regret until the last breath of your life. Yes it is the saddest part of our life, but when the death came to us there’s no turning back to our lives.

Nicks Canivel

When your time comes you will just have to give in because even if you try you will just end up and.die.

Glaiza Gangan


Fearing death will only make you weak in terms of accepting the truth. Yes I fear death but it is better to accept this fact and live your life to the fullest without regrets.

Moiseslyn Masagca

It made me realized that all of us will died that no one can predict when this time will come, but it is not the reason for us to stop move forward and look for the brightest side of our life, used this gift from our God in a good and lawful actions.

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Ashley Nhicollete G. Dela Rosa

No one is actually dead until the ripples they cause in the world die away. Death is not the end at all.

Jeybie Mae David

We all know that everything has an ending and be prepared for it. When its your time you can’t do anything but to accept it. Death comes unexpectedly we just need to face it.

Shen Danielle Villoso

this made me realize that death is not scary if you know to your self you were doing the right thing and doesn’t commit crime.

She Mercado

I’ve always feared death, who doesn’t? Death is one concrete example that we have no control over the things that are happening around us, we’ll never know when our last breath would be.

MERCADO, Sheilla Mae O.

Julinar Dorado

Sometimes I wonder when will I die. Am I afraid? Am I ready? I don’t know. Death is something we can’t control. All the people in this world will face death because nothing is forever. Knowing that we will leave anytime soon hurts and those people who are left behind suffers the most. I realize that death is the beginning of another chapter of our life, we need to be ready.

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